"Your transitions are really good, good variety of shots and your timing is perfect!"
A lot of my feedback from media students referred to the miming being in sync with the footage. It took me hours to get it matched up because there was a lot of the same song lyrics with pitch variations which meant the right footage had to be matched for each individual sentence, reusing footage was something I couldn't do because Marina has such a unique quirky and distinctive voice. I'm glad the audience picked up on this because to me its probably the most important aspect of a performance music video. Transitions were another thing that was brought up quite a lot in my feedback. I used cuts and fades throughout my music video, I think they work well with the song choice and style. Cuts being used for the more aggressive dominating parts of the song and fades towards the end where there was a lot of repetition. The cuts helped create a sense of power alongside the song and followed the idea of a strong female character with a clear message.
"I think its really simple but effective, it captures the simplicity of the words in the song but in a really effective and easy to watch way"
Simplicity wasn't something I was expecting to get positive feedback on however a lot of the comments I received were positive about it. I feel I stuck with my original idea of making the song the focus point and I think it worked quite well. My music video is visually appealing and one of my feedback said
"I like that the music videos idea is something very different to anything you'd see in the charts, its the complete opposite to most current videos and I think thats very unique."
"Its a really simple video which makes it easy to watch and its very visually appealing"
"its just really nice and easy to watch, its just a really nice pretty video."
I was really happy with this feedback because this is exactly what I wanted to create by going against the male gaze theory and over sexualisation in almost every pop and music video, its probably the biggest convention of a music video and this is why I wanted to challenge it.
"The acting in the video is really good, it makes the song relatable and gives the song real emotion"
Quite a lot of my feedback was about my talent and her acting and emotion in the performance, I think my talent really brought my music video to life and made it relatable to the audience.
Improvements
Camera Shots
"A bigger range of camera shots would have made the video more interesting"
Camera shots of a larger range were feedback I received from my target audience, I realised I had a limited amount of shots when I reached the end of constructing my music video I made shots longer than I had originally planned, and a wider range of camera shots would have added a wider range of shots in my music video. This would have helped with the simplicity of my music video maybe making it more visually appealing.
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